In life
When things go haywire,
and the water of resilience is unable
to put off " Pain-fire ".
Pour some sand,
The sand of time,
because sometimes a grain of sand is mightier
than a sea of water.
After all it is the sand that is
the destination of every wave of water.
what we see as a havoc
is nothing but a mere outburst of senses
what one gets depends on
how one uses his 'perception-lenses"
Time is a great healer,
so give "the Time".... some time
because no one can hold in one's hand
neither the sand nor the time.
6 comments:
XXXCELLENT!!!!
read it lik i used 2 read bedtime stories wen i wz 6 yrs old....
u jz gotta publicise dat 4 sure....yy
its a story of Bla bla...keep it up
ya pretty gud man.......... thought quite in depth...!!!!!!!!
Yaar thats
Nice work
no one express its exellence.
Keep doing
yeah, nice one, but i liked the previous one and the first one better....well i just wanted to give my frank opinion so this is it.....
it could have been better, regarding the length...well u took a bit of time getting ur next poem posted, so i was expecting more....
now i am saying u should write km length poems but this poem ended, just the time it should have picked up speed.....
just give 'the Time' , some time......nice one mate!!
Well dis is really nice.. I lyked d metaphorisation a lot. :)
~Miss Sparkle
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