Thursday, August 27, 2009

That cup of tea



when i said
Come lets talk
she quivered a bit but,
only to say "how about a walk?"

two steps down the lane
i tried every bit not to act insane
i knew it was my day..
hesitantly,i offered
let's have a cup of tea??
she smiled,blushed
followed by a "yes"...

hmmm...
tea never seemed so beautiful,
so full of aroma, so sweet..
may be,
her smile added that extra sugar,
the air around her that xtra warmth,
the charm on her face that extra colour

Some say,
tea is nothing more than leaves, milk n sugar...
but i differ
a cup of tea makes friends,
it holds the time for u ,
it makes those special people stay with u
for that xtra minute, that xtra hour...
Isn't that great???

finally,
she left me..
before giving me a company of lifetime
the cups filled with her reminiscence,
In my company,
those empty cups still wait for her..
the teas are sweet, but not great
the colour ,the fragrance all there
but still without her ..all faint.

I wish i could hold her then.
say, all those unsaid things..but,
most importantly, i regret
That one more cup of tea...
and dear,if you are reading this..
How about another cup???

9 comments:

Bright Shade Of Darkness said...

simply class,

I never understood how u jotted down heart on paper that much simply....
from where u find the words....

well I will say something special in special style....

I wish I could have had a walk on lusty land.....
Holding some one's special rosy palm in my rough hand....

But I know god not bless every on with such fate......
But I am patient enough, for mine I will wait....

Ya I still remember the day......
we were sitting on bed in our own way.....

Dissolving me and you in formation of We...
Trying to solve almost all problems of life with a cup of tea.........

I still remember we have solved so many complex problems of nation.....
For each and every problem of news paper we almost provide a solution....

It was neither you nor me.....
but we together with a up of tea....

I miss you as well as your company...
but what i miss most is the cup of tea....

I know you have so many responsibilities to full fill,
So manyyyy people to deal,

I will not ask to give your much time to me....
But request you to always have time for a cup of tea.......


That all for now, wish u happy JINDGI..
Hope to join you soon on a cup of tea......

Anonymous said...

good one bro..... i never knew you wrote so well!!

Aman Bhadauria said...

i like.. brother.. i like

Unknown said...

ahaan..simply wel writen..i wonder wid such simple wrdz hw do u manage to pen it down so corectly..dis is wat U ROCK 4..!! \m/ ;)

hero wero zero said...

thanks everyone, thanks a lot !!

Sandy said...

Loved it!

Sandy said...

Luvd it!

RavS said...

Damn it! Vikas.. Why have u made ur own blog then...

Back to Katy, well, as VK said it is a poem that is really simple but cute..

But i have another thing to say..
I really like the way u start ur poem with a relevant and intriguing picture.. Now the picture u used here is also interesting.. But i thought it didn't go with the emotions of poem...

Hope to see more posts in 2010...

ashish ranjan said...

Beautiful narrative... Simple yet touching... Regrets always make good writer, I feel..